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Shallow Me by ~Mr-Sinstral:iconMr-Sinstral:



You wade into calm waters.
The sand slides between your toes as your wade through the water.
Swaying with the currents you stride forward.
Light shimming off the tops of the waves, you run your hand across the surface of the water.
Your footfall finds no ground.
Peering into the water you are at the edge of an abyss.
Breathing in deeply you dive into the water.
Darkness encompasses you as you swim further down.
The water is cold.
You wish you had stayed in shallow waters.
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Just a poem I wrote. Mostly about people assuming that I offer nothing of myself but the surface of my personality.

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~LostNALie16:iconLostNALie16: Sep 12, 2007, 1:26:48 PM
the end of the 2nd line seems very redundent following the first, and it would be you, not your :)